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End of Month Article Ideas

March 31st, 2008 by (Michy)

March has come and gone, and April is around the corner, as is May… we have end of school coming up and that means: prom, graduation, summer break, and it’s time to start thinking about these types of articles right about now to maximize your page views.

Also, we are still in the middle of Spring but leading into Summer, so any lawn and gardening articles that can be both seasons are going to do well. In fact, you’d be surprised how well I’m hearing properly written lawn and garden articles are doing. If you buy a new piece of equipment for your yard this Spring or Summer, and in depth product comparison and personal story about why you picked the brand and style of lawn equipment you purchased will likely do very well – don’t be afraid to use brand names. In fact, you might consider doing a lawn article about comparing different pesticides, weed killers, fertilizers, plant food, etc… product comparisons do well most of the time and usually align really well with ads.

Some stations, like TBS and USA have Summer Seasons for certain shows. Army Wives is coming back soon, and a few others. Find out what these Summer Season shows are and write about them. I don’t know/think AC will pay much of television articles upfront, but the page views on them should be good if you write about them properly. Some of these shows are already showing last year’s reruns getting ready for the new season.

I don’t know why, but there’s a buzz the car repair articles do well during the Spring and Summer months. It could be because winter is over and people are doing things like changing out the anti-freeze with a better summer coolant or flushing their system – hey, how about a Woman’s Guide to Changing Oil in a Car? I used to do my own oil changes and saved a ton of money when I really needed it – a step-by-step guide for women would probably do well, dontcha think?

Tips for upkeep and minor maintenance on vehicles would be a good one to look at as well as guides and how tos for getting your car ready for a road trip, preparing your college student’s car for road trips, etc.

Then comes the travel and vacation articles. Summer is known for vacation time, so write things like what a college student can do for their summer off from school, affordable and fun family vacation ideas, and the like. Also, there have been changes in international travel regulations so an article about how to prepare and make sure you have the proper paperwork for travel might do well too, particularly for college students who might be traveling alone for the first time.

Well, these are just some article ideas for the coming season… feel free to add any of your own to the comments if you aren’t going to have time to write on them, so others might get a spark.

Keep writing!

Love and stuff,
Michy

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Woulda, Coulda, Shoulda – Where HAVE you learned English?

March 31st, 2008 by (Michy)

One of Michy’s pet peeves:

Would of, Should of, Could of…

WRONG:

I would of gone to the store if you’d of asked me.

RIGHT:

I would HAVE gone to the store if you HAD asked me.

This one just irks the crud out of me. You need to know parts of speech to understand WHY it’s not ‘would of’ and ‘could of’.

The word OF is a preposition. It is defined by the American Heritage Dictionary to mean:

1. (used to indicate distance or direction from, separation, deprivation, etc.): within a mile of the church; south of Omaha; to be robbed of one’s money.
2. (used to indicate derivation, origin, or source): a man of good family; the plays of Shakespeare; a piece of cake.
3. (used to indicate cause, motive, occasion, or reason): to die of hunger.
4. (used to indicate material, component parts, substance, or contents): a dress of silk; an apartment of three rooms; a book of poems; a package of cheese.
5. (used to indicate apposition or identity): Is that idiot of a salesman calling again?
6. (used to indicate specific identity or a particular item within a category): the city of Chicago; thoughts of love.
7. (used to indicate possession, connection, or association): the king of France; the property of the church.
8. (used to indicate inclusion in a number, class, or whole): one of us.
9. (used to indicate the objective relation, the object of the action noted by the preceding noun or the application of a verb or adjective): the ringing of bells; He writes her of home; I’m tired of working.
10. (used to indicate reference or respect): There is talk of peace.
11. (used to indicate qualities or attributes): an ambassador of remarkable tact.
12. (used to indicate a specified time): They arrived of an evening.
13. Chiefly Northern U.S. before the hour of; until: twenty minutes of five.

Now, in the following sentence:

I wish they would of told us.

Please tell me which one of the definition above OF meets?

Here, let me help you…

IT DOESN’T!

The proper way to write this sentence is:

I wish they would have told us.

I blame this particular grammar mutation on the internet mostly, casual writing in general, and on the school systems no longer teaching people how to diagram sentences.

Yes, I realize when lazy people speak we say, “I wish they woulda told us.” But just because we pronounce things quirkily (no, that’s not a word – it’s a michy-ism), that doesn’t mean that we lower our standards of writing and start using words improperly.

I know, this sounds more like a rant than an editing tip, and for that, I apologize. I’ll blame it on the pain meds and levaquin I’m currently taking, but I was perusing some online content today, stuff that was supposed to be professional, and I found “would of”, “could of”, and “should of” all over the content!

Oh, well. At least I and my readers will know better, right?

Happy editing!

Love and stuff,
Michy

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Touch of Reality

March 31st, 2008 by (Michy)

Fingertips touch and interlace
A breathless kiss upon my face
Tingling sensations upon my skin
Feelings of passionate exchange begin

The oceans swirl from a distant sea
As the sun sets on the coast
Hazes of reds, blues and greens
Fade like lights shining through a ghost

Fuzzy confusion and thoughts combine
Losing all contact with space and time
As I feel your caressing thrill me again
A silent prayer that this moment never ends

Losing control as I pull you to me
And fantasy slowing sinks in
I can close my eyes and for a moment believe
That I’m there with you again

I feel the kisses soft and warm
Down my throat and across my neck
Oh, God, remember how we made love ’til dawn
How could you possibly forget?

Your hands on my flesh, bring me up
Your body on mine, lay me down
Eagerly reaching, could not get enough
My eyes were closed and I was heaven bound

The power of the flesh is very real
And the feelings were so divine
But we also shared things we feel
Creating a love to hold together, bind

Emotions, sensations, and passion enfold
To hold all the feelings together
Sharing secrets with you I’ve never told
And will keep sacred forever, forever

But something washes over me
Just a simple touch of reality
That some things were never meant to be
Anything but memories…

(Copyright 2003 Michelle L Devon. All rights Reserved.)
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6-Word Story Challenge Contest

March 31st, 2008 by (Michy)

Last month on my forum, I held a 6-word Story contest, along the same lines as Wired’s 6-Word Story contest.

The rules were simple: tell a complete story in six words.

Over on the right, you will see the finalists of this contest.

Now it’s YOUR turn to decide the winner. Here is how voting will be handled for the contest:

On the forum, you can only vote ONE TIME. All votes here on the forum poll will count as three credits for that entry.

On the blog, you should only be able to vote one time unless you clear cookies and then you can vote more than once. I’d like to ask no one do this and only vote one time. All votes on the blog will count as two credits for that entry.

I will also be taking votes via email. You can email your first, second and third choice – IN ADDITION to the poll votes here and on the forum. All first choice nominations via email will get two credits and all second and third choices will get one credit. I will only take email votes one time from one email address. You can send your vote to michelle@accentuateservices.com – be sure to put 6-Word Challenge Vote in the subject line and then list your 1) 2) and 3) choices.

At the end of the voting period (which can end at any time, unannounced, but will be for at least two weeks but not more than a month), we will tabulate all credits each entry has received, and will then announce a first, second and third place winner.

There will be prizes for all three winners…. I’ll post more about the prizes later.

Winners will be announced both on the forum and on the blog first, and then we will email the winners directly.

I ask when voting that you consider several things:

1) this was a contest, and as with any contest, the writer should have given their best effort. Things like grammar, spelling, punctuation – take those into consideration too.

2) choose the entry you think tells the best ’story’.

3) try NOT to vote for your own entries unless you just absolutely think no one else can possibly have written one as good as yours!

4) feel free to send visitors who are not members of the forum to come to the forum and either register and vote, email and vote, or go to the blog and vote.

5) yes, you can vote on the forum, on the blog, AND via email if you choose.

6) any questions, post them here or on the forum thread – BUT – do not reveal which ’story’ you wrote and submitted.

Okay – let the voting begin!

Any questions?

Stay tuned for April’s short story forum contest coming this week – this one will have a cash prize!

Love and stuff,
Michy

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Author Interview: Victor J Banis

March 31st, 2008 by (Michy)

Author Bio Victor J Banis:

I’ve been writing professionally for nearly half a century, with more than 150 published books to my credit, many of them critically praised (“the master’s touch in storytelling,” Publishers Weekly). Native of Ohio, longtime Californian and now live and write full time in West Virginia’s beautiful Blue Ridge. Most recent works: Longhorns (Carroll and Graf); Lola Dances (MLR Press); Slow Dance (CarnalDesiresPublishing). I write in all kinds of genres, both gay and straight, humor, mystery, horror, erotica, even a recent cookbook.

Author Interview

It’s rare today to find an author who does nothing but write for a living. Do you have a ‘real’ job other than writing, and if so, what is it? What are some other jobs you’ve had in your life?

Victor Banis: I’ve mostly written, but I did work for about 15 years in Property Management in San Francisco. I’m retired now, except for the writing.

What compelled you to write your first book?

Victor Banis: I started writing as a young teen, a series of Nancy Drew type mysteries featuring a classmate, Carol Cail nee Peters, and wrote for years for my own pleasure. I wrote my first published novel mostly on a whim.

Have you always wanted to be a writer?

Victor Banis: I’ve always been a writer.

Tell us a little bit about your book/s. What are their titles; which is your favorite if you have more than one, and briefly let us know what they are about. Pay particular attention to your most recent book and/or your first book:

Victor Banis: Way too many to list here, but there is a biblio on my website, http://www.vjbanis.com These days I mostly let the stories choose me, and when they get really insistent, then I start putting them down. Longhorns took me over completely and I wrote it in two weeks. Lola Dances was an idea I resisted for ages because it dealt with a cross dresser and I did not think I could do justice to that subject, knowing very little about it – but, it just wouldn’t go away, so I thought I’d write a page or two to get it out of my system, and next thing you know…Slow Dance I wrote years ago, and it wasn’t very good, so I put it aside and rediscovered it in a box a year or so ago, and rewrote it.

Are you currently working on any writing projects our readers should watch for release soon?

Victor Banis: I’m always working on several things. I just finished a police procedural, Deadly Nightshade, that was quickly picked up by MLR. I’m critiquing works for a couple of writers, and editing an anthology of short pieces from my local writers group, titled The Green Rolling Hills – due out late this year from Wildside Press. And working with another writer on a humorous novel, Heaven Help Us. Also sitting down to edit Angel Land, a futuristic thriller.

How did you feel the day you held the copy of your first book in your hands?

Victor Banis: Even after all these years, I am always wet-my-pants excited to hold a new book in my hands. I hope I never lose that.

What type of music, if any, do you listen to while you write?

Victor Banis: I listen to all kinds of music, but never while I write. I give my writing my undivided attention.

What inspires you and motivates you to write the very most?

Victor Banis: Almost anything can – a comment overheard in passing, a photo, a phrase from another writer - Lola came from a novel I was reading set in the gold mining camps, and how hard it was for a woman then and there, and I thought, “What if it was a small, effeminate male? Wouldn’t it be really tough?”

What one thing are you the most proud of in your life?

Victor Banis: I was indicted on Federal obscenity charges for my first novel (for some very tepid lesbian scenes) and nearly went to prison. I became a strong advocate for freedom of speech in writing, and especially, for glbt writings, and my experiences helped to free all writers to write more openly, but especially opened doors for gay and lesbian writers, and ultimately made me something of a cult figure in that genre. It is very gratifying to know that I made a difference for others. I am nearly 71 years old. At this point, you don’t want to look over your shoulder and see nothing behind you but a trail of wasted moments.

What about your family? Do you have children, married, siblings, parents? Has your family been supportive of your writing?

Victor Banis: I’m a single gay male, now senior. For the most part, my family has been very supportive.

The main characters of your stories – do you find that you put a little of yourself into each of them or do you create them to be completely different from you?

Victor Banis: I don’t feel that I create my characters so much as discover them. They come to me, and by the time I write their stories, they are already full blown and altogether real to me. I always see them as people I know/have known, and not as works of fiction. Yes, I think there is some of me in each of them – and vice versa.

Is there an established writer you admire and emulate in your own writing? Do you have a writing mentor?

Victor Banis: I have a great many favorite writers. I learned much, and still do, from W. S. Maugham, but I am entirely self taught as a writer – for better or for worse.

When growing up, did you have a favorite author, book series, or book?

Victor Banis: I loved those Nancy Drew books. In the 60s, I read everything by Mary Stewart and Helen McInnes. I read pretty much everything by Le Carre and Graham Greene. But I am an obsessive reader. Lacking anything else, I read cookbooks.

What about now: who is your favorite author and what is your favorite genre to read?

Victor Banis: I don’t get to read as much now as I’d like and I find many big selling authors today quickly burn themselves out – great first book, sometimes very good second book – and downhill after that. I like Janet Evonavich. I don’t limit myself so far as genre. I never liked being pigeonholed.

Hey, let’s get morbid. When they write your obituary, what do you hope they will say about your book/s and writing? What do you hope they will say about you?

Victor Banis: I don’t think they will have any Pulitzers or Nobels to mention. I never think of myself as a “great” writer, whatever that is. At my best – and every artist deserves to be judged by his best – I’m a very good one. I am essentially a story teller. I give people a good read. I can name off the top of my head a score of writers better than I, and everyone reading this could easily add a score more – but there are few who have worked longer and harder than I to master the craft of writing; not so very many who are more supportive of other writers or more open to helping them; and none, I am sure, more committed to the genre of glbt fiction than I have been. I’m content with that.

Location and life experience can sprinkle their influence in your writing. Tell us about where you grew up and a little about where you live now – city? Suburb? Country? Farm? If you could live anywhere you want to live, where would that be?

Victor Banis: I grew up on a farm in a small Ohio community. That has certainly influenced my life, including my writing. But I lived most of my adult life in California, Los Angeles and then San Francisco. The ideal for me would be to have a place in the city and one in the country as well (that Gemini thing). But, really, I have always believed in taking my happiness with me; i.e., you live in your head, really, it doesn’t matter much where you are physically, the way I see it. Oh, a little apartment in Paris would be nice, I suppose. But I’d still be seeing everything through the same eyes. The grass isn’t really any greener over there.

Do you have any pets? What are they? Tell us about them.

Victor Banis: I had dogs for years, and loved them as family. But, my life has been lived mostly by the seat of my pants. That’s fine for me, no complaints, but I concluded some years ago that it probably wasn’t the best kind of life to share with “youngsters.” I’m willing to sleep under a bridge if I have to (haven’t yet, but come close a few times) but I would not want to inflict that upon pets. For me, alone works best.

Bring us into your home and set the scene for us when you are writing. What does it look like? On the couch, laptop, desk? Music? Lighting, handwriting?

Victor Banis: I live a very stripped down life, so there’s almost no furniture in my house. I have a computer station in the front room and a window on either side where I can look out. No music. Everything very bare bones.

Do you watch television? If so, what are your favorite shows? Does television influence of inspire your writing?

Victor Banis: No television, but I do watch movies on DVDs.

What about movies? Same as above.

Victor Banis: Again, my tastes in movies are varied. I’m currently watching a TV series, Threshold, and another one, The Tudors, switching back and forth. I just ordered The Life of Brian (Monte Python). I’m more inclined to watch old movies than recent ones, but I enjoyed The Queen. Anything, really with Helen Mirren.

Focusing on your most recent (or first) book, tell our readers what genre your book is and what popular author you think your writing style in this book is most like.

Victor Banis: Lola Dances is set in the slums of NYC and the gold mining camps of California. As for genre, I suppose it would be classified as gay fiction, though again I really don’t like labels. Slow Dance is straight, an erotic thriller. They’re quite different. I can’t think of any popular writer to whom I would compare my writing style. I write Victor J. Banis books. I don’t know anyone else who does that.

How long did it take you to write your most recent (or first) book? When you started writing, did you think it would take that long (or short)?

Victor Banis: I can write very fast. I have done books in 4 – 5 days. Longhorns took 2 weeks (but total immersion, which is physically very draining.) I just finished a police procedural, but that was a departure for me, something I hadn’t done before, so it took more like 3 months. I never grade myself in terms of how long or how quickly. I just try to get myself out of the way and let the book write itself in its own time. I am very much opposed to “forcing” a book by adhering to some kind of schedule, although I do write every day.

Is there anyone you’d like to specifically acknowledge who has inspired, motivated, encouraged or supported your writing?


Victor Banis: I’m very fortunate to have a number of people who help me in quite tangible ways; I live rent free in a house supplied by a lifelong friend, and I have a nephew who helps with expenses – but both are modest and prefer that I don’t mention their names.

Anything else you want your readers to know?

I don’t think there is a much of interest to tell about myself beyond what can be found on Wikipedia or on my website, http://www.vjbanis.com I grew up in a very large family (11 children) and in dire poverty, but surrounded by intelligence and a sense of joy in living that has served me well all these years. As children, we were encouraged always to give whatever it might be our best shot, and discouraged from any defeatism. We were not, are not, quitters or whiners. I am a graduate of the school of hard knocks, and have lived a life that seems to me nothing short of miraculous, coming from where I did. I start each morning giving thanks for another day. I continue to be, as I have been for many decades, drunk on the magic of writing, and I think it is my writing that best defines me, for good or ill. Only the mediocre artist is always at his best. I’m happy to say I’ve written an awful lot, and a lot of it was awful – but, some of it, like some of me, is very good. As for the rest – well, if everything here were perfect, there wouldn’t be much point in Heaven, would there?

My books can be found on my website, of course, and on Amazon as well (Slow Dancing might not be there yet)

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Author Interview: Rhonda Allen

March 29th, 2008 by (Michy)


Author Bio: Rhonda Allen

I’m a twenty-nine year old mother of four, student, and cosmetologist. I’m mainly a home body spending time with the kids, writing, or idling time with some kind of strategic game on the Playstation. I’m am avid reader. I love learning about the economies in other countries, religions, history, and am fascinated by mental health. I consider myself an open-minded person, learning to learn how to do old things a new, faster, and interesting way. I am an optimist. I enjoying helping others and involve myself with people, groups, and organizations that are like-minded. I enjoy meeting individuals who, as with me, don’t allow titles and labels defining them, but show character by way of their actions. I hope to one day become more actively involved in community services.

Author Interview: Rhonda Allen

What compelled you to write your first book?

Rhonda Allen: It began as a personal journal; however, after dealing with the emotions that came with, I changed and added most of it. I thought that there are many who may have encountered the same experiences or know someone who has, and Growing Pains, if nothing else, would be a great conversation starter.

Have you always wanted to be a writer?

Rhonda Allen: Writing was something of a past time and that I kept secret. It wasn’t until I had the desire to convert my thoughts and feelings into a storyline that brought the wanting to be a writer about.

Are you currently working on any writing projects our readers should watch for release soon?

Rhonda Allen: Currently there are several ideas I have ‘on the table’. The next novel is entitled Whispered Fantasies and should be released within the next month or so. I’m also working on a book that will be, the male perspective of what Terry McMillan’s Waiting to Exhale , if you will Of course the sequel to Growing Pains, Confession of Karma is scheduled sometime next year.

What type of music, if any, do you listen to while you write?

Rhonda Allen: Music I listen to while writing is dependent on what I’m writing. For example, if I’m writing sometime that requires a loving character then I find some old school tracks such as The Isley Brother, Earth, Wind and Fire.

What inspires you and motivates you to write the very most?

Rhonda Allen: Usually and idea for a book is based off of a thought stemmed for a situation I’ve endured or observed. I allow myself seeing the different view points, being mindful of there being two sides to every story, and then the truth. Saying as much, I question worse case scenarios, the ‘would have, should have, could haves, and a story forms. I’m inspired by such just because the creative juices have room to compose.

The main characters of your stories – do you find that you put a little of yourself into each of them or do you create them to be completely different from you?


Rhonda Allen: I do add myself or adopt the attitude of someone else in my stories. I think a writer is most creative in stepping outside of their everyday norms with a character.

What about now: who is your favorite author and what is your favorite genre to read?

Rhonda Allen: I admire authors Nicolas Sparks and Zane, but I do not emulate either. Nicolas is an incredible writer who brings life to his characters emotion in a way that commands attention. His stories leave you feeling as though you’ve experienced love and lose right along with each character. I have been impressed by Zane after seeing the once self publisher emerge. She is a poster child for a true ‘rag to riches’ tale that motivates me in continuing with pushing my own titles into the mainstream.

What about movies? Any that influence or inspire you to write?

Rhonda Allen: When I set time to write I make sure to be pure of what I may have watched on television or movies. I don’t want my readers feeling like they could have just watched this or that movie instead. When I am watching television it’s more of comedy just to whine down from the emotions needed to write.

How long did it take you to write your most recent (or first) book? When you started writing, did you think it would take that long (or short)?


Rhonda Allen: Growing Pains took almost four years to write. Since I hadn’t intended on producing a novel I supposed time didn’t matter as much. Nearing the end of about chapter thirteen is when I made the decision to convert it into a novel and added more chapters and ideas. The last year of writing enabled the idea for a sequel so I had to ensure everything would lead up to that.

Anything else you want your readers to know?

My writing, as I said, comes after having a thought in which I’d like to express myself. Instead of having a thousand potential novels that I’d start I usually write on the MySpace blog. Those are generated by either my personal feelings of a situation. The url is www.myspace.com/rhondara. Growing Pains is currently only available online at http://www.amazon.com, and http://www.lulu.com/content/1713288. There is also a group started on Facebook.com called Growing Pains.

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Because of You

March 29th, 2008 by (Michy)

Because of you, I learned to love
Because of you, I learned to trust
It was you who showed me how to feel
Took my dreams, made them real
You showed me what it means
To act without any fear
And seize the moment, trust your heart
To live in love and act the part

I trusted you, I loved you
And believed that you loved me
And that was real, all I could hold
That was the only truth I could see

And then one day, my world fell
Came crashing down around me
A late night call, a lie was told
And I lost all trust I’d come to know

Then the anger, and the pain
The arguments ensued
I knew inside you were hiding
But still, I believed in you

I tried to hold you, was pushed away
Both in your heart and with hands
You wouldn’t let me love you
And I just didn’t understand

Still I tried, until you screamed
And said such ugly things
That I withdrew my heart from you
Because I couldn’t stand the pain

Then one day, without a word
I watched you drive away
I waited for you to return
But you left my life that day

I remember the fear I held for you
Not knowing where you were
Never once suspecting
You had run away to her

My heart shattered, my dreams all gone
Left me wondering what I’d done wrong
I took the blame, believed your lies
And a part of me inside had died

Truth be known, the love remains
Some things inside will never change
I still want to believe your lies
Yet too often you see me cry

Because of you, my heart is torn
Because of you, I live with doubt
Afraid to step too far alone
Still waiting for the truth unknown
Not trusting anyone or anything
From the loss of faith, remembering
All the promises made and vows unspoken
A heart destroyed, but a love unbroken

I don’t know anymore who I am
And I surely don’t know who you are
You’re not the man I once loved so much
All that remains of him is my broken heart

And it’s all because of you…


(Copyright 2006 Michelle L Devon – All rights reserved.)
(Feel free to link, but please do not copy.)

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I Don’t Know What to Do

March 28th, 2008 by (Michy)

Sometimes we write straight from the heart and that makes for great emotion but bad poetry. That’s what this poem is – bad poetry, but lots of emotion at the time it was written. Poets sometimes write for the art, the craft, the audience, but more often than not, poets write for their own hearts to just reveal what they were/are feeling.

I Don’t Know What to Do

by Michelle L Devon

Loving you was the most beautiful thing
I have ever felt
Losing you was the most painful blow
I have ever been dealt
Letting go of you now is what I must do
But I don’t know how, when I still love you
If I say the words one more time
And see that fear show in your eyes
And do not hear the words returned
Then I’m nothing more than a lover scorned
And I won’t let you do that to me again

Real love doesn’t run away when things are tough
Proof you couldn’t have loved me very much
And that’s the biggest reason for the tears I cry
Not the loss of trust but rather the lies
The total abuse of the faith I had in you
Believing and trusting in dreams come true
Waiting for the day when we would rejoice
You were called away by another’s voice
Too weak you were to stand alone or stay
Like a coward, you walked away
Without a thought for the heart you’d break

I wanted to hate you, and at times think I do
Behind the love I feel for you
How could you be so selfish, think just of yourself
When there were those who loved you more
Than anyone has loved you before
And than anyone has loved you since
Real love, not based on lies, but circumstance
Knowing who you are through and through
And in spite of the truth now, still loving you
When you live in fear that the truth reveals
That you know inside how you really feel

I want to say I’m strong enough to wait
To feel your touch and seal our fate
But it’s not that I am not able to be strong
It’s that I need to feel in your heart I belong
And that means always, not just when convenient
I know how you feel, but not what your words meant
Trying to understand the game you play
The disparity of your feelings and the words you say
Or the words you don’t speak when you want me
If I’m there for you, I cannot be free
Choosing the fear and pain, not desire but need

Part of me needs to walk away
Part of me needs to try to stay

And I don’t know what to do

(Copyright 2005 Michelle L Devon All Rights Reserved)
(Feel free to link, but do not copy)

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Technorati Doesn’t Like Me

March 28th, 2008 by (Michy)

Just ignore this post for a moment since I’m trying to get Technorati to quit saying 403 forbidden.

Be back with a real post later today!

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Sick of Being Sick

March 28th, 2008 by (Michy)

Ugh!

I’ve been to the hospital recently… took a book with me to read, packed up my computer to write while I was there, but in the end, ended up not having the time to do anything.

Been feeling like snot recently and it’s not making for good writing or editing to work on my manuscript to prepare to send it to an agent.

I have worked acquisitions before and an editor, and I know some of the trash that has come across my desk. I mean, agents and editors alike know that sometimes a mistake might slip through in a 100k manuscript, and most won’t be too tough on a little something here or there, but some of the stuff that comes through the slush pile is just… well, not anywhere near ready for submitting.

Silly mistakes that any good author should catch need to be removed… so me working on preparing my manuscript to submit to an agent while on pain killers and sick is probably not the best idea.

So until I recover, my quest for a literary agent is on temporary hold…

Until I get back to work on my manuscript, I’ll leave you with a post sorta related to this issue that is about submissions and it works for both publishers and agents alike:

Submission Guidelines OR ‘Can’t you read?’

For now, I’m heading to bed for a nap. Be back soon!

Love and stuff,
Michy

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